1) Very martial arty but less visually spectacular. 2) More powerful and greater energy than 1 3) Hmmm bit vague 4) the lead characters stuck in the corner a bit... maybe move them across a little bit - slightly more in front of the polylith (is that a word).
1) Very martial arty but less visually spectacular.
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3) Hmmm bit vague
4) the lead characters stuck in the corner a bit... maybe move them across a little bit - slightly more in front of the polylith (is that a word).
My pick of the day goes to 2
:)
Hi Tom,
ReplyDeleteI haven't nailed down the figures' story in 4, but I think you're right there's room for them to move a bit further from the corner. Thanks.